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Re: Prologue- I'm there for you
wow ! i really liked it, espcially the way the observer came out in the end, you should definitly go on with this, its really good !! please tell me ...
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: Breena (One)
hey, i liked the story and im really looking forward to more. i like your characters though you should make it clear about warren's actions. in some places i felt ...
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: Fresh Meat!
welcome, zephy. oh don't worry about not fitting in with your school cause you'll definitely fit in here !! the best writing sit ever !! if you need help figuring ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: The Joy of Friendship
hey, that was nice an i really liked it. i liked your characters but somehow some characters like esme and robert cullen seemed too much like the twilight characters, try ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: a perfect life !! 2
hey everyone !! its been a while since i wrote the first chapter but here i am with the second chapter. so review away. its not as long as the ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Driven to Witchcraft
hey buddy here. okay that was really good but i think you should make it longer. are you planning to expand it ? cause to me if you did this ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: a perfect life !!
This is just something i kept on working on in my spare time. i'm not really good at writing so please don't be too harsh. also what other ideas can ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Once Upon a Morning Chapter One
hey, buddy here. i like this story that you wrote. but no more talk let me get down to the critque: i'll just just list down on some main points ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Chase chapter 1 part 1
hey there , i liked the way you wrote your story. but whatever i get right down to the point. my review: - the introduction you started off with as ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: Hello!
hello there my name's buddy. welcome to YWS. you're right this site is big and there are so many different forums. since you're new i would suggest that you go ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: Sup, fellow Writers? Newbie here. xDD
hey and welcome to YWS. hope you enjoy it here. i'm budding writer . please call me buddy or bud. i love writing romance and fantasy fiction and i'm intrested ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Hi
hey newbie, welcome to this writing site. i'm budding riter call me buddy or bud if you prefer. say something about yourself and please not the obivous like i love ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: young little newby
hey i'm buddy. callme bud. hey and welcome to this writing site . so what type to genre do you like to write in ? i love to read and ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Hi. Bonjour. Hola!
hey maria. i'm budding writer here. call me bud. glad you found this site now you can be part of this wonderful group of writers including myself (stands and cheers) ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Hey everyone!
hey bud here. everyone already said everything just to welcome you and hopeyou have fun in this large group of lovely writers. pm me if you want to say something. ...
Apr 11, 2009
